Needless to say I hadnt spellchecked it properly before posting, its just as written, but thanks for pointing out the typos.
Person: shes using it to emphasise singularity, in this case him. Its also used in Confucius style quotes, whether really Chinese or not.
Invisible wall:hes in a 3D computer environment, which should be obvious, shes in control. Action therefore need not have any balance with effect. Ergo she hits him with an invisible wall. She doesnt really have to move at all.
Rear end changed to backside, ass or similar didnt fit.
Nappy fasteners are now tape, so unstuck the tape fasteners.
Its jumping from fact to fact on purpose with the fin, its her going faster than he can take things in properly. Youre right that might be a difficult point to balance though.
Fingers, they arent his, they are what shes lumped him with, OK, not saying his is fuzzy, corrected to nor would the fingers he had hold onto the towel.
I cant take this line seriously.
Never watched a mother change a babys nappy?
Yes, this really DOES happen. I know - it happened to me. You probably just dont remember, ask your mum. Really its included to embarrass the character as well as being factual.