What you think?

http://rapidshare.com/files/15394805/Last_Night_V2.mp4

I need to finalise the lyrics and theyll be going in the section with the mad filler guitar solo.

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Hmm.. Alot of the lead stuff sounded quite out of key.. Do you know your stuff when it comes to harmony?

Youve got your own cool experimental style going on there. I just dont think your choice of notes was too appropriate for the chords being played. Around 44 seconds in and a bit on from there, theres some dodgy accidentals (an accidental is a note played out of key) which I didnt really think worked, but the intro before that was tasteful and nice

Also, pan the leader in the centre please It gives me a headache listening to the lead mainly on my right ear for all of it!

The little bit at 4:15 to the end is really cool I liked that!

Much better than the first one, but a bit too noisy.

Quote from: jamieLHmm.. Alot of the lead stuff sounded quite out of key.. Do you know your stuff when it comes to harmony?

Youve got your own cool experimental style going on there. I just dont think your choice of notes was too appropriate for the chords being played. Around 44 seconds in and a bit on from there, theres some dodgy accidentals (an accidental is a note played out of key) which I didnt really think worked, but the intro before that was tasteful and nice

Also, pan the leader in the centre please It gives me a headache listening to the lead mainly on my right ear for all of it!

The little bit at 4:15 to the end is really cool I liked that!

My lead on the intro sounded ok on my original version of the track, but in this recording it sounds out of key to me too, 40~46 seconds  Gonna have to play with it a bit to get it right.  Harmony, technical terms no, never studied music in any depth at school.  I always work on the premise if it sounds good it is good.

The middle section lead is one big impro, so, could well be many notes out of key.....  But wah wah washes over them  This section is going to have some vocals, just need to finish the lyrics.

Quote from: SeriousMuch better than the first one, but a bit too noisy.

Noisy, sounds very much like I wanted it

Quote from: Walrusbonzo

Quote from: SeriousMuch better than the first one, but a bit too noisy.

Noisy, sounds very much like I wanted it

In that case great